Comments, Comments, and More... ya know Comments....

We, as a class, were asked, once again, to comment on our peers' writing. The request was not to critique their writing, but to provide helpful encouraging feedback.

I really do enjoy going through other's blogs, because it clears my mind of what I am thinking of and gives me some great examples of verbiage or style. It also is very informative and interesting to see what the other topics are.

The best comment I recieved was :

Robert SappingtonNovember 25, 2012 11:36 PM

Finding your counter claims took some work, but it was done!

First off, love the topic. I read though all your stuff also. As a gamer I just wanna say, list more pros! Like how games help devlope peoples math skills and response time to thinking!! I want more counter claims!
My questions: What are some more positives about gaming? What sources did you use when you used facts? (works cited not listed) And yeah I know its being edited like mine!

For a resource check out http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC558687/

Might help your claim / counter claim :)

Here are some of the comments I left:

Allison: http://thecriticalcrow.blogspot.com/2012/11/counterclaims-arguments-against-gun.html?showComment=1354064279297#c4447994305472519418

Simone: http://wordwidewriting.blogspot.com/2012/11/counter-arguments-to-my-paper-on.html?showComment=1354064840431#c8841106226256051226

The comment that I liked the most was to Liz:

Crystal SmithNovember 27, 2012 5:17 PM

Liz, like I have said to you before, I absolutely commend you for taking on such a task as this subject. I have to say how much, as you know, it means to me as well. I think that you are coming into this very level heading and as a real representative of the church. The only thing you have to be careful of, which I know you will be, is not to misrepresent the churches beliefs, and understand why others dont agree.. other than that YOU ROCK!!